Thoughts Of Summer Days

Posted: January 20, 2014 in TANKA POEMS

Clinging by a thread.
One more thought about those times,
Remembering you.
Thoughts of the happy moments,
How I miss you summer days.


©2014 A. Dougherty

  1. susie25 says:

    Hello you!
    Now then…….you’re getting too good at this! I shall need to set you something harder. 🙂
    The first line is excellent……it brings the reader in, and grabs their interest. This is a really good one.
    I think you write better like this when you are more disciplined. Great stuff Allan, I’m proud of you.

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